Many think that religion should be taught in schools while others think it should be avoided. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There has been growing debate and controversy surrounding religious education. Some assert that introducing

this

is favourable

while

others argue that it is not.

Although

that curriculum could provide

students

with a deep understanding, I strongly agree with the latter point of view because it might brainwash their minds, resulting in unfavourable happenings

such

as murder. On the one hand, proponents of introducing religion classes believe that

students

are likely to develop well-rounded knowledge bases.

For instance

, teachers can teach a wide range of religious information including its history and belief through

such

lectures for certain years. Actually,

this

environment is preferred for

students

in order to deep dive into it,

according to

a report from The University of Tokyo.

However

, if some who already believed in a specific belief because of their family, were taught a different religion in lectures,

this

would be a risk or meaningless time.

Therefore

, it is not easy to implement

this

class as a school subject.

On the other hand

, I believe that religious education could highly affect

students

' ideas or thoughts.

In other words

, there are some possibilities that

this

type of lecture might lead to brainwashing them. In fact, recent research conducted by The University of Tokyo discovered that what individuals had

learnt

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an adult strongly affected their perspectives. If religious education was driven by a teacher whose thought was antisocial, it would negatively impact his

students

, which might cause serious incidents in the future.

Thus

,

this

kind of curriculum should be avoided in schooling systems. In conclusion,

Whereas

teaching regions in schools has positive effects to some extent, I firmly believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

This

is because

such

classes would determine individuals' perspectives and there is a risk that they might trigger undesired incidents.