Global warming is creating many problems for the environment and humans. What problems does global warming cause?

In many societies these days, people are concerned about global warming, which effect to
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and people. The aim of
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suggest a number of possible solutions. First of all, in our modern world, global warming is one of the most
straighforward
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straightforward
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and urgent
problem
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problems
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for
goverments
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governments
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. The reason why is that
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enormous amount of greenhouse gases in
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. After that, it is
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to
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temperature around the world. The more Co2 in
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, the
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higher
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at
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. On top of that more than 90% of gases
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by vast cities, megapolises and factories.
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result, it is harmful
for
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whole
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Earth
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eco-system
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.
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, it
is include
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forests, oceans, lakes, soil,air, wind
also
animals and insects. Second of all, warming
also
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to
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humans too, especially
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physic
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and mental health. In
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season high
temprature
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temperatures
may
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increase
the rates of
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disease or
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amoung
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among
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. People should solve the warming problems,
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new ways, how to handle
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it.
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, researchers investigate the association that suppose only renewable energy is quite a nice way to struggle with warming troubles .
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to it, individuals may start to use electric cars,
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the
planet
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resources
such
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, air and trees.
To sum up
, eco-activists have to reach a lot of urgent targets. In conclusion, global warming is producing many issues not only for
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popullation
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population
populations
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but,
also
it is danger for
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our
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planet. There are a lot of points, why it is
happining
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happening
and how to struggle with it.
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