The graph gives information about male and female gym memberships between 1980 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph represents the data on the fitness association ship of men and women from 1980 to 2010.
To start with males experienced ups and downs till the
year
of 2010. Firstly
, 2000 members attended the gym in 1980. After that, It surges to 4000 in the year
1985. Moreover
, the category of men shows a decline in 1885 with approximately 2000 members. Membership in the fitness zone increases continuously till 2005. It remained at its peak with a ratio of 5000. Furthermore
, in 2010 it gently decreases.
In addition
, females experienced some fluctuations over the period. However
, this
group shows an upward trend till the year
of 2010. Therefore
, it remained at 1000 in 1980. Moreover
, associations of girls slightly decreased in the year
1990 to around 2000. After that, women went to the hit point of nearly 3000 in 1995 and 2005. Lastly
, in their period of 2010 category of women remained at nearly 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that both members remained above the membership of 2000 in the years 1990 and 2000.Submitted by anishakumarileemani on
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