Some people say that team sports are more beneficial than individual sports. What are the benefits of playing in a team? How can it help in later life?

it is argued by a group of people that playing with a group of people has more good points

instead

of playing solely. I believe that

this

trend has huge efficiency as efforts of various

players

can be divided and athletes can

also

able to maintain good relationships with

another

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sport

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person which definitely gives them more opportunities to them in upcoming life. To commence with, the benefit

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if the list of

players

are playing in a single unit, they need to put less effort individually,

along with

this

, their qualities will combine in the single squad which enhances their ability to win.

For example

, the Indian cricket club have several

players

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which Virat Kohli has a huge confidence level,

whereas

MSDhoni is well known the tricks to scare opposers.

Besides

this

, team

sport

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can help to maintain unity and good relation.

This

is because different categories of individuals, who are from a different culture have come to join the team and become good mates, which provide assistance in future at the time of trouble.

Moreover

, if the team win the match with great courage, will get higher ranks and income for luxurious life.

For instance

, as per research in America revealed that an International match which was won by American

players

can get millions of money for a secure future.

To conclude

,

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firmly believe that achievement is definite

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when someone plays collectively

due to

different qualities in each human being, which not only gives motivation but

also

embellishes good relations.