Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they where born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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Some people derive Joy living close to their birthplace and the reason for
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is familiar vicinity and family though there are some merits and demerits to
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which we will discuss extensively .
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with, one is already accustomed to the cultures and traditions of his/her hometown unlike going through the stress of learning a new environment.
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, relatives and close family around can be an added advantage.
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, a person might run into difficulties in the course of daily living, but friends and family can be counted on to come to the rescue at no extra cost or perhaps give the individual a soft landing.
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, Too much attachment to one's hometown can cause the person better opportunities. For ,instance A nurse that has a better chance of advancing both in knowledge and pay through relocation can lose that opportunity with
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type of mindset.
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,interacting with
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of different cultures helps broaden our intellect and people who reject
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are sometimes redundant. In conclusion,
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there are arguments in favour of both opinions, I believe there is great benefit attached to living and mixing with people of different backgrounds and cultures.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Familiarity
  • Comfort
  • Social ties
  • Family ties
  • Belonging
  • Resources
  • Opportunities
  • Fear
  • Unknown
  • Financial constraints
  • Cultural attachment
  • Language barriers
  • Limited education
  • Skills
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