In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?
Currently, people have more curiosity about the history of the
places
they inhabit. There are many explanations for why dwellers want to acquire this
information
. Besides
, the documentation could be found on paper or virtually and there is an increasing population that keeps this
valuable information
. In this
essay, I will explain why and how to investigate (about) places
in which humankind lives.
To start with, it is crucial to know about the quality of the land where societies reside in order to establish what type of buildings could be constructed or measurements that should be taken into account. For example
, Bogota, which is the capital of Colombia, was built above a lake that is
well-known as 'Arzobispo'. Therefore
, there are many regions with a myriad of muddy waters. Then
, people must deeply know the events that have been passed through the evolution of those places
, and then
evaluate what are the proper materials to build in and the infrastructure that is
allowed to be constructed in a specific spot.
Secondly
, there are many resources with high-quality references where people can search for evidence. For instance
, The Internet has become a cutting-edge tool in which most of the information
is widely found, not only scientific papers and books of history but also
personal experiences. Additionally
, in the City, governments have safely kept the most preponderant guidelines of (the) ancient times. For example
, the 'Agustin Codazzi' is a corporation located in Bogota where records and maps are saved and it is open to the whole population.
To sum up
, there is significant information
that should be known by the population if they want to live safely. Besides
, acquiring knowledge about places
where communities live is remarkable and represents a sense of belonging.Submitted by luciaagudelomotta on
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