"Your friend from overseas is coming to visit you next month. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell them what they need to bring tell them what they will be doing during the time they are visiting warn them about some things that might be challenging"

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Good morning my nice friend Samanta! How are you? Are you not tired of vacations? I hope you are great and you are not tired on a trip.
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right,I have not been to America in my life.But
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,I always dream to go there.So,you will tell me about my favourite country.I think you have gone to Canada.Because you love it and Canada is a dream city.I heard you are going to come back next month,so I was very happy after hearing about it I got a very nice gift for you.Can you bring me Canada's flowers,please? You know I like them.And
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,bring some perfumes,if you can.In general,do not forget that you have to bring a big teddy bear for my little brother.During coming back,do not come by train,I think it is dangerous for your health.So I prefer a plan to others.I have got only
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advice for you.I will conversate with you when you come,ok? Nice to meet you! Bye-bye! Best regards, Raykhona Eshtuxtaeva Raykhona
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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