Your friend has been a place on a course at the university where you studied.he/she would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend.in your email Describe where you lived when you where a student at the university Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accomodation Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accomodation.

Dear Doris, How are you doing and how are you getting ready for the new life ahead of you, I want to congratulate you on your success in getting admission into IMO State University Owerri, I got your letter where you asked for my advice in choosing an apartment in university.
To begin
with, I will like to brief you about where I stayed during my time at the institution. I stayed at the popular Messiah lodge situated at Bishop's Court which is just about 3 minute's walk from the school's main gate,
For example
, the good thing about
this
area is the constant light,access to the market and the roads are well tiled, it takes away so much burden from you as a student.
Furthermore
, I will like to hint to you the best way in which you can look for accommodation.
First,
we have a student group on both Telegram and Whatsapp where you can state your need for accommodation, Alternatively, you can
also
go to the website at www.imsu.com and search for available accommodation there. Lest I forget there is
this
common mistake a lot of freshers make when looking for a house. Most of them patronize agents to help them procure a house.
For instance
, Some of them are fraudulent and some don't care about the well-being of the person, they will just get a low-standard place for him/her. I look forward to hearing about your experience when you are done with your first semester, Take good care of yourself and bye for now. Your's Sincerely Chidinma
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