Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind the bar. To what extent do you agree?

In recent days, captives have not conducted anything in the

prisons

,

thus

there are those who think that they should work something in jails without salaries or any payments for them.

Although

they have to compensate

their

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actions in the past in the

prisons

, I completely agree with the given statement and the reasons for it will be elaborated in the enlisted paragraphs.

Firstly

, working activities by the

prisoners

would generate a chance which they can socialize after going out

from

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the

prisons

.

This

is because they can acquire abilities of occupations

such

as making furniture or building houses from community jobs with no money.

For instance

, there are some

prisons

which

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prisoners

have to discriminate

litters

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every day in Japan, and

this

occasion provides

trainings

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training

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for them to obtain

capability

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for

working

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.

Hence

,

prisoners

can learn how to work outside by community jobs. Another key point that I would like to emphasize is the fact that

the

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free social activities produce positive effects for individuals. It means that if

prisoners

make chairs and

sells

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them for

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for

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to

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normal citizens, residents can buy excellent commodities

by

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at

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reasonable prices. To illustrate, though most Japanese

has

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to spend 150

yens

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yen

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for a

bottle

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beverage, inhabitants in Abashiri only have to expend 100 yen because

prisoners

make plastic bottles for free.

Thus

, working in the

prisons

can originate beneficial impacts for people

live

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living

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around the

prisons

. In conclusion,

prisoners

can undergo job training, and contribute

for

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to

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citizens around the

prisons

from

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by

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doing unpaid activities.

Therefore

, I fully agree with

this

view.