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Nowadays, people have greater access to last food. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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The lifestyle of the twenty-first century is in many ways different in comparison to previous centuries, one of them being the way people eat. Some people have happily embraced the advent of fast
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, others are deeply concerned over the detrimental long-term effects of fast
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 on human health. In the following essay, I will outline both pros and cons of fast
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 and will elaborate on why I believe the disadvantages far outweigh the benefits The advocates of the widespread use of fast
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 tend to argue that they are an essential part of the modern era and its hectic lifestyle. One
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 argument is that most employees, who work a regular 9 to 5 job, cannot afford to prepare their own meals, and
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, must rely on restaurants and fast
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 chains to consume the required daily calories they need.
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,
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 allows outsourcing jobs to different sectors of the economy and
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, a more efficient economy.
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, those individuals, who are leading a more health-conscious life, point out the plethora of adverse effects of fast
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 consumption in the long run. The primary concern would be the fact that fast
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 are rich in artificial ingredients and saturated fats, which are known to contribute to obesity, digestive problems, and of course cardiovascular issue.
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,
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 research, the majority of these fast
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 deliver the daily calories one needs but, fail miserably to satisfy other dietary, criteria including vitamins, amino acids , and essential fatty acids conducive to a healthy diet. In conclusion, since their introduction, fast
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 has increasingly become prevalent worldwide, despite frequent warnings by health experts over the detrimental impacts of fast
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 on essential body organs
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 as the heart, the liver, and kidneys. It is my opinion that
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 prevalence is chiefly
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 corporate greed and not
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 of the benefits they offer. It is conspicuous that the disadvantages of fast
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 consumption far outweigh their benefits and immediate measures should be taken to meaningfully alter the way we live in the modern era.
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