Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).

In the 21st century, one of the most controversial issues is the question regarding the students’ funding in high school. The largest number of people advocate an opinion that scholar curriculum needs to be provided with charity work.

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issue will first look at the issue’s nuances and

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elucidate its own opinion. Recently, I read an awesome article in the Brooklyn Magazine based in the USA. The author of the magazine wrote about the education system more than once and it is truly interesting to be well-known for the cases he speculated about. The

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article I read provided an interesting survey

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corrections specifically in the scholar curriculum. Even though a substantial number of US citizens approved of the idea of adjustments, the latter part of people completely disagreed. It was elucidated in many facts. First of all, many years have passed, so it is complicated to change the education system. The second con is the student’s desire, which will dramatically fall on account of the government's force. In my own opinion, It is not as vital as we can picture. Nowadays we have more important world issues that need to be solved, notwithstanding if the government will decide that by providing

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work we will increase the level of educated and intelligent people, I will have agreed with

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adjustment without a shadow of a doubt.

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I know for a fact that these days It is complicated to change it because I reckon that providing

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scholarly work may have serious consequences.