Some people think that enjoying the present is more important than planning for the future for both countries and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Every moment in an individual's
life
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is important. For
this
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growth, whether in the present or
future
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. Some people argued that enjoying
the
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each moment of
life
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is very important rather than thinking
future
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. I totally disagree with
this
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statement . I will discuss the reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.
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with, there are
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plethora
reasons of
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for these
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these situation
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this situation
these situations
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.
Firstly
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,
life
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is unpredictable, people do not know what happened in the
future
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. If people well planning for the
future
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, they were combat with
the
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every situation. Nowadays ,
individual
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individuals
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think that enjoying every moment and they spent a lot of money. For expensive clothes , food and other items
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of saving money.
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folk invest money
on
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in
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life
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insurance, it will have
anytime
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any time
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when they needed.
Secondly
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, we see
,
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the
government
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government's
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perspective. It is
necessity
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a necessity
the necessity
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to
future
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planning for cities and countries development. When the government could not
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their ideas,
it's
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it
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affected both individuals and countries .
For instance
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,
authority
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the authority
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could not planed
economic
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the economic
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side . In the fourth coming
years
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,years
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citizen suffered economic crises and it would
also
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affected
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the countries
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countries
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countries'
country's
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development.
However
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, some folks are
overthinker
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overthinkers
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.So , they think coming situation
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of living
this
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beautiful
life
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. It would create health problems . To illustrate ,
the
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in the
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survey of
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the indian
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indian
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Indian
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government , 28% of folks suffered mental health issues because of
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the tension
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of
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in
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next
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the next
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days
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few days
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. In conclusion ,
life
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is shorter so, we live with fun but it is
also
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important to
makes
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make
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a plan
the plan
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plan
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plans
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for
fourthcoming
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forthcoming
fourth coming
years to better
lives
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our lives
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Present enjoyment
  • Future planning
  • Long-term satisfaction
  • Short-term gratification
  • Economic planning
  • Infrastructure development
  • Spontaneity
  • Immediate pleasures
  • Balanced approach
  • Mindfulness
  • Strategic foresight
  • Anticipation
  • Well-being
  • Present-mindedness
  • Prosperity
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