Some people think that enjoying the present is more important than planning for the future for both countries and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Every moment in an individual's

life

is important. For

this

growth, whether in the present or

future

. Some people argued that enjoying

the

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each moment of

life

is very important rather than thinking

future

. I totally disagree with

this

statement . I will discuss the reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.

To begin

with, there are

plathora

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plethora

reasons of

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for these

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these situation

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this situation

these situations

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.

Firstly

,

life

is unpredictable, people do not know what happened in the

future

. If people well planning for the

future

, they were combat with

the

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every situation. Nowadays ,

individual

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individuals

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think that enjoying every moment and they spent a lot of money. For expensive clothes , food and other items

instead

of saving money.

For example

folk invest money

on

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in

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life

insurance, it will have

anytime

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when they needed.

Secondly

, we see

,

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the

government

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perspective. It is

necessity

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a necessity

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to

future

planning for cities and countries development. When the government could not

organised

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their ideas,

it's

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affected both individuals and countries .

For instance

,

authority

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the authority

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could not planed

economic

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the economic

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side . In the fourth coming

years

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,years

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citizen suffered economic crises and it would

also

affected

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the countries

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countries

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countries'

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development.

However

, some folks are

overthinker

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.So , they think coming situation

instead

of living

this

beautiful

life

. It would create health problems . To illustrate ,

the

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survey of

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the indian

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indian

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government , 28% of folks suffered mental health issues because of

tension

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of

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in

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next

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the next

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days

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. In conclusion ,

life

is shorter so, we live with fun but it is

also

important to

makes

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a plan

the plan

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plan

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plans

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for

fourthcoming

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forthcoming

fourth coming

years to better

lives

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our lives

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.