You recently returned from oversea by air and left a valuable item on the plane. Write a letter to the airline manager. In your letter .Describe the item you left behind .Say why it is important to you .Explain what you would like the airline manager to do
Dear manager
I am writing
this
letter to ask you to find the valuable item that I forgot on the plane.
My name is Ajay. I came the last
night through the west-jet flight and landed at 11:45 pm. In a hurry, I got my laptop and handbag and left within an hour from the airport. This
morning, to make a payment to the delivery boy then
I was shocked because my purse was not in my coat and luggage.
It is black leather with a gold-plated brand name, CK. I remember while
leaving the plane, suddenly one person requested me to call their parents because his network was not in service. I think, with my phone purse got slippers.
It is very important for me because my cards are in my purse like my driving license, health card, office card and bank card. I already locked my bank cards so, I do not have to worry about that but others are necessary.
Could you please ask the staff to check my seat W345, it should be under or close the seat. It would be great if someone handed it over to the lost and found section. Inform me when you find it and send me a message or give me a call on 56699xxxxxx.
Waiting for a prompt response from your side regarding this
request.
Yours sincerely,
AjaySubmitted by harmandeep51075 on
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task achievement
Include more specific details about flight information, such as flight number or route, to assist the airline staff further.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure minor grammatical errors are corrected for clarity, such as 'got slippers' in the second paragraph.
coherence and cohesion
The letter begins and ends with a proper greeting and closing, establishing a polite tone.
task achievement
The writer clearly describes the valuable item and its importance, conveying sufficient urgency and clarity.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.