Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children.

As the role of technology has been very crucial in everyone's life,

children

have been accustomed to

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computers

. One may say using

computers

will give great knowledge to

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more negatives than positives. I believe using

computers

can have more negative effects than advantages because the

computer

makes

children

lazy and violent. If

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children

become addicted to

computers

, they will become lazy in their life and they will no longer concentrate on other important things they have to do. Day by day, as the

computer

steals their valuable time, they will not show an interest in studies and outdoor games.

As a result

, they will not only become lazy but

also

they will not be physically sound.

For example

, my father bought me a personal

computer

when I finished

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10th grade because I had got

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in my

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public exams. As I become more habituated to a

computer

, I became indolent to do my other activities

such

as studies, sports and

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other extra routines.

Consequently

, my rank dropped to A- in my 12th standard. If anyone tried to take away my

computer

from me, I used to behave violently. Kids act unnaturally if they want to own these electronic machines.

This

creates abnormal behaviours in

children

. In future, they will not be social.

On the other hand

, their important role in their schools will get damaged if

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. Another major disadvantage

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computers

is,

children

may use adult sites (above 18 years old sites)

instead

of using a

computer

for beneficial reasons.

For example

, today almost

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every website, there are ads which promote dating services, adult

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, etc. These ads and

then

the time spent on those websites by a kid are enough to spoil a good child. My conclusion is that

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parents should either supervise their

children

while

using

computers

,

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and encourage them to use

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for benefits or

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not allow their

children

to use

computers

.

Otherwise

, their

children

will have to face a lot of problems.