A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter -Describe what this book was about -Explain how this book influenced you -Say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear sir, I am a daily reader of your magazine and would like to suggest one of my favourite books " An Experiment with the Truth" for your "The

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that influenced me most". Please allow me to elaborate on why I recommend

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course of action to be realised.

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had a great impact on me when I was a little kid. There are some soul-touching chapters in the

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where the great Mahatma Gandhi explains his technique of experiential learning. In those ,chapters he demonstrates how to overcome barriers of communication, socialism and political background. Not only he just describes the solution but

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shows how he achieved those conclusions with his real-life experience.

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, when I read the whole

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and try to implement those learnings into my life I found it really uncomplicated things and make life easygoing. I would greatly appreciate it if

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is included in your article because I think young minds need certain directions in life and

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will surely help them. Eagerly awaiting your response. Hiral

Submitted by solanki26hiral on Fri May 05 2023

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

178 words

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who are choosing to educate their childen themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages?

A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.

Government should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. Do ou agree or disagree?

in many part of the world, children and teenagers are spending more and more of their time indoors. what do you think are causes of this problem? what measures could best be taken to solve it?