A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter -Describe what this book was about -Explain how this book influenced you -Say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear sir, I am a daily reader of your magazine and would like to suggest one of my favourite books " An Experiment with the Truth" for your "The

book

that influenced me most". Please allow me to elaborate on why I recommend

this

course of action to be realised.

This

book

had a great impact on me when I was a little kid. There are some soul-touching chapters in the

book

where the great Mahatma Gandhi explains his technique of experiential learning. In those ,chapters he demonstrates how to overcome barriers of communication, socialism and political background. Not only he just describes the solution but

also

shows how he achieved those conclusions with his real-life experience.

Furthermore

, when I read the whole

book

and try to implement those learnings into my life I found it really uncomplicated things and make life easygoing. I would greatly appreciate it if

this

book

is included in your article because I think young minds need certain directions in life and

this

will surely help them. Eagerly awaiting your response. Hiral

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

178 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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