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can yield more demerits than good by increasing

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dependence on parents and exposure to

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is a bad way of raising a child. It is not a new thing for young people to demand from their parents, but it

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for their wishes to be fulfilled always, because it makes juveniles

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believe that their guidances have it all,

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of resources to offer at some point in time, and perhaps

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adolescent had been used to abundance before, that child might result into other means of satisfaction;

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, engaging in stealing, fraud and other internet crimes.

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, giving youngsters permission to engage in anything they want is

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method of nurturing minors, as it

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much freedom and if they are not properly monitored, many more harm can

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style of parenting can

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to total dependence on parents.

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that do constantly have their demands met, most times do prefer not to work during adulthood, they prefer to continue to request; not only from their

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from friends and other people in

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breeding lazy and irresponsible adults later in life.

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, allowing too much freedom like permitting young individuals to access all social media sites can expose them to erotic websites; some

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cartoons sometimes reveal adult scenes, and can

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kids to pornography, masturbation and if these

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beyond control, might graduates into rapist and paedophile as they grow older.

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, allowing youths to do as they wish can

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waywardness, indecent dressing, bad mannerisms and other social vices. In conclusion, meeting

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demands and allowing them to be free have been seen to have more setbacks than

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dependence on guidance and making the innocent wards vulnerable to bad things, thereby birthing lazy, wayward and

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