Write a letter You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. •describe what you enjoyed about the course •say how much cooking you've done since the course •suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter in order to express my feedback on the cookery course completed recently. Let me explain to you in detail below. I was a part of the summer cookery batch that was held
last
month. I thoroughly enjoyed the sessions as they helped me understand the value addition of each ingredient in our kitchen.
Moreover
, the teaching faculty at your institute is very friendly and approachable.
Also
, after taking your valuable lessons, I have tried various recipes at my home. For all the delicacies, I have received bountiful appreciation from friends and family members. It has been an enchanting experience to be associated with your school.
Hence
, I would like to suggest another course which is currently not being offered. It is none other than baking cakes and pastries.
This
is quite famous in our town and many of my friends are interested in joining your school if you would preach these dishes. Please do let me know your thoughts on the above suggestion.
Last
but not least, I would like to extend my sincere gratitude toward your school and the wonderful teaching staff. Yours faithfully, George Beckham
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