The two maps show a park in 1920 and in present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The two maps show a park in 1920 and in present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The two maps illustrate the changes in grange park for over a century in 1920 and nowadays.
Overall
, the east part of the garden has seen a lot of development;
however
, the rest of the features were relocated, demolished, or expanded. The present garden has more entertaining facilities.
To begin
with, the stage for musicians on the left-hand side has been renovated and modernized into a big Amphitheatre for concerts and the seats have been relocated from the west to be around the rose garden by the
center
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of today's grange park
whereas
the central fountain, water plants pond on the north-east, the south-east glasshouse, both rose gardens located near the north avenue and the south Eldon street entrances have been eliminated.
Moreover
, new characteristics have been added on the right. A coffee shop and a large playground for children are newly built just next to the Arnold Avenue entry on the northeast. A new underground car park entrance is constructed on the east-west side where you can find the new water feature in front of it.
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