A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request some advice about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food.
Dear Liza,
I am writing
this
letter to enquiry about a few things before visiting your country. France is a beautiful country and Correct article usage
the curosity
curosity
to know more about the place is high. My friends who have visited Paris often talk about the tasty food and the beautiful culture.
Buying gifts is a difficult task for me, even for dear ones. So please advise on what sort of things you and your wife like to receive especially from Canada. I am buying for the kids Correct your spelling
curiosity
marvel
toys and video games as you have mentioned multiple times Capitalize word
Marvel
of
their obsession with Marvel.
There are tons of activities to do in a different country but kindly do let me know what have you planned for my visit. Is there any specific type of clothes should I wear? I would like to wear clothes Change preposition
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according to
the weather and culture as I don’t want to stand out. Now, there are so many food allergy
that I have which is being treated. Change to a plural noun
allergies
Thus
, it’s important for me to know what are
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the
kinds of food we will be eating during my visit.
I am very excited to meet you and your family. See you soon!
Yours Sincerely,
Umida AbdumajitovaCorrect article usage
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coherence cohesion
Try to address specific areas you want to improve, like the logical flow of information. Making each paragraph focus on a single idea can help achieve this.
task achievement
To enhance the task response, add more details or ask a few more specific questions about the activities planned, so your friend has a clear idea of what information to provide.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are very well done, providing a clear start and end to your letter.
task achievement
Your writing tone is very suitable for the task, maintaining a friendly yet formal demeanor, which is appropriate for writing to a friend.