Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you about the foreign exchange student who joined our college recently. As you are aware

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pupil is currently stationed in my room and we are sharing it. As you know he is a student who came from India, and I am finding it quite difficult to live with him since he cooks all sorts of curry and spices inside the place which sometimes gives a bad odour. I am facing all sorts of problems with

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student because it is hard to convey a message to him since we have a language barrier.

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, he is the kind of person who is disorganized and lives untidy. As a person who likes to be Immaculate, I find it really hard to be with him in the same area and

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affects my daily studies. He leaves his clothes on my table and once Two of my books got misplaced. ,

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he plays loud music which makes it hard for me to focus on my studies. As a resolution to

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incident, I would like to have a separate room for myself. I am currently facing

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issue

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my room having Two beds, I would like to move into the single bedroom which has an attached bathroom. I hope that you consider my request and kindly provide me with a solution. Faithfully, Devin

devinvindula7Sat May 06 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

231 words

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