the chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age in the UK who used the Internet every day grom 2003-2006.

the chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age in the UK who used the Internet every day grom 2003-2006.
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Presented for consideration is the given bar chart indicates the proportion of Britain's grown-ups of different
age
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groups
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who surfed the internet on a daily basis commencing the period of 4 years from 2003 to 2006. Units are measured in
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. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, there are 5 old
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groups
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involved in the report. It can be clearly observed that the over 65
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accounted for the lowest proportion at all times
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adults in the 16 to 24
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tended to use the internet most. There is an approximate equivalence in the rate of the 25 to 44 and 45 to 54
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. Turning to the details, 2003 to 2004 was the period when the 16 to 24 old
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group
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remained the
percentage
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of 80 and there was a dramatical decrease in
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from 19% to no per cent for the over 65
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group
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other
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witnessed a slight increase with the same proportion of 10% for the 25 to 44 and 45 to 54 old
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groups
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. 16 to 24 occupied the highest chunk in the year 2005 which outnumbered the over 65
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by nearly 5 to 1. 25 to 44 and 45 to 54 showed a small difference of 5%
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the 55 to 64 grown-ups accounted for nearly 35% in the same year.
At the end
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of the period, it can be clearly seen that the older people are, the less they use the internet and
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phenomenon was reported by
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, groups, percentage, group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Digital adoption
  • Internet usage trends
  • Age demographics
  • Technological literacy
  • Digital divide
  • Online banking
  • Social media platforms
  • Professional life
  • Accessibility
  • Online shopping
  • Engagement
  • Daily users
  • Barriers to adoption
  • Entertainment
  • Staying connected
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