Some people believe it is important to spend a lot on family celebration, while others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
A highly controversial issue today relates to whether to celebrate
relatives
birthdays and weddings or not. Change noun form
relatives'
relative's
This
essay will discuss both debates and explain why I believe the argumenta
to celebrate are stronger.
On the one hand, those who support family celebrations cite the various benefits Correct your spelling
arguments
of
that Change preposition
apply
such
events can bring to an
household. These Change the article
a
ranges
from getting to know some extended members of the family, to savouring the moment to enjoying the unique moment and understanding cultural norms regarding traditional weddings. Fix the agreement mistake
range
For example
, the last
time I attended my nephew
wedding in Lagos Nigeria, I got to know that it's against our tradition to come empty-handed to a wedding. Change noun form
nephew's
In addition
, such
parties are special moments in a person's life which will be remembered for their whole life.
On the contrary
, others believe that this
is a way to burn money. It is often argued that it cost a lot and do
not compensate for the work. Some people even go to the extent of borrowing a huge amount of money from banks to organize Correct subject-verb agreement
does
such
events, which is not always reasonable as the money could have yielded more profits if it's invested in stocks and bonds. A second opinion is that this
value could be spent in different ways such
as organizing trips for the
couples and buying clothes for the birthday celebrant.
In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. Correct article usage
apply
However
, I feel that spending lavishly on weddings and birthdays are
justified as Correct subject-verb agreement
is
such
events will be a fraction of time that will never be forgotten for some individuals.Submitted by oludayotemilade on
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