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The charts illustrate the number of people who were affected by 4 types of noise pollution in day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007.

The charts illustrate the number of people who were affected by 4 types of noise pollution in day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007.
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The bar chart shows the different 4 types of
pollution
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 in the year 2007 in
cities
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 and rural
areas
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 that are badly affecting the
people
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 throughout the day. The population was high in
cities
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 compared to the
village
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. Almost 75
million
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people
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 reside in
cities
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 and 40
million
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 in
village
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areas
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. the main highlight is there is no industry
pollution
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 in
village
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areas
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.
To begin
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 with, Vehicles are more in
cities
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. So in the graph, near to 60
million
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people
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 suffer traffic
pollution
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 in
cities
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 and in villages 35
million
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people
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 from an
overall
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 population of 40
million
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.
Secondly
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, train
pollution
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,
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 is almost the same when compared with the population in villages and
cities
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. 10
million
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people
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 affecting
this
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 noise
pollution
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 in both
areas
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.
Thirdly
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, Aircraft
pollution
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 is less in both
areas
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. Near to 3
million
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people
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 tolerate the noise coming from aircraft.
Last
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 but not least, There is no Industrial
pollution
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 in the
village
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.
while
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 in
cities
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 only 1
million
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people
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 suffer.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pollution, cities, areas, people, village, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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