The charts illustrate the number of people who were affected by 4 types of noise pollution in day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007.
The bar chart shows the different 4 types of
pollution
in the year 2007 in cities
and rural areas
that are badly affecting the people
throughout the day. The population was high in cities
compared to the village
. Almost 75 million
people
reside in cities
and 40 million
in village
areas
. the main highlight is there is no industry pollution
in village
areas
.
To begin
with, Vehicles are more in cities
. So in the graph, near to 60 million
people
suffer traffic pollution
in cities
and in villages 35 million
people
from an overall
population of 40 million
. Secondly
, train pollution
,
is almost the same when compared with the population in villages and Remove the comma
apply
cities
. 10 million
people
affecting this
noise pollution
in both areas
.
Thirdly
, Aircraft pollution
is less in both areas
. Near to 3 million
people
tolerate the noise coming from aircraft. Last
but not least, There is no Industrial pollution
in the village
. while
in cities
only 1 million
people
suffer.Submitted by anjualex444 on
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