Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world , especially among young people . Identify the possible causes of this trend and propose some solutions you think would be effective .
Official records show the number of illegal activities
such
as fraud has been increasing . Most of these cases happened by youth . It appears there are some causes for Linking Words
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progress and Linking Words
also
some solutions .
Perhaps the major cause is related to Linking Words
poverty
. It is universally accepted the root of most crimes is connected to financial needs . If Use synonyms
people
could not make enough money they would attract to some negative activities like smuggling in order to earn some profits .Use synonyms
Secondly
, younger Linking Words
people
might do some actions under peer pressure or even do some dangerous things to attract others or prove themselves . Use synonyms
For instance
, in many ,countries pupils join criminal gangs to prove their abilities to their families or others which can lead them to face severe consequences .
It is Linking Words
also
some remedies to Linking Words
this
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Firstly
, Governments should have some practical schemes to decrease Linking Words
poverty
in their society . They could assist Use synonyms
people
with lesser incomes with financial aid like subsidising food or other basic needs and Use synonyms
also
other perks like free education . In the long ,run these projects can greatly undermine Linking Words
poverty
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, parents and schools can play the most important role to help children . They can encourage teenagers and help them to believe in themselves and show them the result of involving with criminals. If they increased the confidence of their children it would prevent these pupils to prove themselves in the wrong ways .
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To conclude
, It appears Linking Words
poverty
is the major reason to do criminal illegal activities , Use synonyms
also
younger Linking Words
people
might do criminal things to prove themselves . Use synonyms
However
, Governments can decrease Linking Words
poverty
with subsidies and schools and parents have to assist their children and make them believe in themselves to prevent them join gangs .Use synonyms
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