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People argue that team sports should be a part of the school time able for children rather than individual sports such as swimming or running. Do you agree or disagree?

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Sports
activity
 is a must
activity
 in schools.
This
 is
one
 of the
activity
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activities
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 that helps
students
 to gain physical and mental strength.
Thus
,
this
 helps them to get more benefits in later times
such
 as
,
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apply
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 graduation, jobs and so on.
Sports
activity
 is categorised as two,
one
 is individual
sports
 and
other
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the other
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one
 is
team
sports
. Individual
sports
such
 as athletics(i.e. swimming, running,
longjump
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long jump
, etc,.) and
Team
sports
such
 as football, cricket, hockey , etc
,.
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,
.
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Both
 of these
sports
 activities are great
in
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from
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 their own
prespectivies
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perspectives
perspective
. Now
lets
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let's
let us
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 discuss
about
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apply
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which
one
 is to be included in
school
 time or not . All we do in
school
 is
studies
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study
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 and
to
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apply
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get good or best marks or grades in exams.
Thus
, they introduced
sports
 in
school
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the school
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 activities list, which should be included in
one
 of the periods. There should be
atleast
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at least
one
 or two periods a week in
school
 schedules.
This
 helps the
students
 to get free from their stressful minds. So, that they can later study better. Well
lets
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let's
let us
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 move on to categories of
sports
,
whether
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and
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 which is best for
students
 .
Individuals
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Individual
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sports
 can showcase the
talents
 of
a
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an
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 individual student
whereas
team
sports
 will show
as
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apply
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the
team
talents
 of the
students
.
Both
 are good in their
prespectives
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perspectives
. Each
one
as
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has
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 their unique
talents
 in
sports
 aspects.
Students
 can always be
invlove
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involved
involve
 in
both
sports
,
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apply
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 so that they can showcase what
their
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they
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 are better
.
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at.
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 When they are in
individuals
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individual
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sports
such
 as
,
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apply
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 running, swimming,
longjump
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long jump
. They can show their individual strength and
talents
.
Whereas
 in
team
sports
 they can be
one
 in
team
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the team
a team
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 to know
everyone
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everyone's
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strength
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strengths
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. so, they can be
one
 in as
team
 members to win the game which they can help to know about each other by strengthing their
team
 as friends.
This
 way they can win any game.
As my
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My
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 conclusion,
that
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is that
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 these
both
sports
is
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are
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 best for the
students
 in
school
 to know their
talents
. So, schools must include
both
the
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apply
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sports
 so that the
students
 can better understand their knowledge
to
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of
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 these
sports
that
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which
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 leads to their future growth.
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