The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps given illustrate the transformation of a particular shop where books are sold from 2000 to the present. From an
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perspective, it is evident that there have been significant alterations in the store for the introduction of a café and a reading space. In 2000, the bookstore was a square-shaped building with its entrance at the west. The service desk was there towards its extreme right, crossing the sections for travel and new books. Most areas of the store were occupied by tomes on fiction in the north and towards the northeast. Non-fiction records were arranged to the South, towards the east of the service desk. At the centre, there were publications on cookery, hobbies and art. The first major change as a part of the re-arrangement is seen at the centre
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when the area is seen cleared for reading. The area for fiction in the north is seen as narrow by a quarter of its previous size. Volumes on art, cookery, and hobbies occupied the other three portions. The space in the northeast, where fiction volumes were there in 2000, is seen occupied by non-fiction novels now. At the place where the non-fiction novels were seen, a café came into existence.
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