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The table below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. CO2 emissions per passenger kilometre co2 emissions EU Funds for transport 2007-2013 eu funds for transport

The table below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. CO2 emissions per passenger kilometre co2 emissions EU Funds for transport 2007-2013 eu funds for transport
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The above-mentioned pie chart illustrates funds for travellers and the line chart illustrates the CO2 radiation per transport per
person
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km
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 between 2007 to 2013. In overview,
EU
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 funding granted significantly to road travelling purposes nearly 52%
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 road emission forms bus and car travelling slight maturity in other CO2 emission forms in the
EU
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 60km and 125km respectively,
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 per travel per
person
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 radiation CO2 for
Air
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 factor was the highest in another form with approximately 370%,
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EU
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 fund allocated to
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 form only 1%.
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, the railway the second most funded was selected during periods was 31%, and public transport allocation for 10%.
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, waterways to only 1%.
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 way per
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 emission was the least CO2 estimated as 30km.
One
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 the other hand,
European
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the European
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union
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Union
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 granted
funded
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Air
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maturity
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as
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 1% per
person
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km
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. It appropriate crucial
benifit
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benefit
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air ways
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airways
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 pollution is
higer
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higher
 than other transport
methos
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methods
 so
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EU
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the EU
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 reduced to
allocated
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 as
low
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 proportion to the
Air
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 factor.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words co, person, km, eu, air with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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