The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main feat make comparisons where relevant.
The presented maps above illustrate the location of
books
by
a number of different genres, specifically in a bookstore, in the period of time from 2000 to these days respectively.
Change preposition
in
To begin
with, It is evident that directly near the entrance still can be seen travel books
, new books
and a service desk respectively. Notwithstanding, It is essential to emphasise that the
fiction Correct article usage
apply
books
were replaced by other books
, such
as art, hobbies, cookery and fiction genre.
Furthermore
, It is significant to add that in 2000 these genres of books
were placed in the middle of a bookstore, while
nowadays It can be seen that these genres were replaced by the cafe with three tables.
Even though there are already a number of different changes, It is substantial to emphasise that fiction books
was
relocated, Change the verb form
were
hence
the number of books
have
decreased, Change the verb form
has
however
these days non-fiction Add the comma(s)
,however
books
can be found in that place.Submitted by mishynadiana on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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