In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? do you think this is a posetive or negative situation.

Accommodation is

one

the

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most essential needs of

human

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and finding a place to live is a serious issue for many

people

. It is said that buying a

house

is better than renting

one

. In

this

essay, we will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of

this

situation.

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the

one

hand, leasing a

house

has some benefits

such

as

easy

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to switch and suitable for most

people

.

Firstly

, You can switch places whenever you want.

For example

, if you do not really enjoy the current

house

and want a better

one

, you will just need to pack your belongings and move to

new

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place. You are not attached to the

house

because you are not the owner and don't have to worry about it anymore.

Finally

, most

people

do not have a lot of money to buy an accommodation.

For instance

, students and poor

people

can not afford an apartment, so renting is a suitable and reasonable choice. Leasing is much cheaper than buying, so

this

is a perfect solution for

people

who do not have financial

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.

In

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the other hand, being a

house

owner brings some advantages

such

as safety and financial security.

Firstly

, you always have a home to live

if

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you have no income or money.

For instance

,

in

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the pandemic, there are many

people

who lost their jobs and they are pushed

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a very bad situation because they do not make money to pay the rent. But if you have a

house

, you will still have a place to live and maintain your life.

Finally

, the

house

is a real estate asset.

For example

, you can sell a

house

with

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a better price than the time you bought it.

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house

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a valuable asset that you can own for a long time and don't have to worry about its value because most real estate assets always increase their price in the future. In conclusion, owning or leasing a

house

is still a big problem for many

people

and

this

problem still depends on

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situation. Personally, I think buying a

house

is much better because its benefits outweigh the

leasing's

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ones

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.