In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? do you think this is a posetive or negative situation.
Accommodation is
one
the
most essential needs of Change preposition
of the
human
and finding a place to live is a serious issue for many Fix the agreement mistake
humans
people
. It is said that buying a house
is better than renting one
. In this
essay, we will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this
situation.
In
the Change preposition
On
one
hand, leasing a house
has some benefits such
as easy
to switch and suitable for most Add a missing verb
being easy
people
. Firstly
, You can switch places whenever you want. For example
, if you do not really enjoy the current house
and want a better one
, you will just need to pack your belongings and move to new
place. You are not attached to the Add an article
a new
the new
house
because you are not the owner and don't have to worry about it anymore. Finally
, most people
do not have a lot of money to buy an accommodation. For instance
, students and poor people
can not afford an apartment, so renting is a suitable and reasonable choice. Leasing is much cheaper than buying, so this
is a perfect solution for people
who do not have financial condition
.
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conditions
In
the other hand, being a Change preposition
On
house
owner brings some advantages such
as safety and financial security. Firstly
, you always have a home to live if
you have no income or money. Change preposition
in if
For instance
, in
the pandemic, there are many Change preposition
during
people
who lost their jobs and they are pushed in
a very bad situation because they do not make money to pay the rent. But if you have a Change preposition
into
house
, you will still have a place to live and maintain your life. Finally
, the house
is a real estate asset. For example
, you can sell a house
with
a better price than the time you bought it. Change preposition
at
This
makes a house
is
a valuable asset that you can own for a long time and don't have to worry about its value because most real estate assets always increase their price in the future.
In conclusion, owning or leasing a Unnecessary verb
apply
house
is still a big problem for many people
and this
problem still depends on individual's
situation. Personally, I think buying a Correct article usage
the individual's
house
is much better because its benefits outweigh the leasing's
Change noun form
leasing
ones
.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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