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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? do you think this is a posetive or negative situation.

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Accommodation is
one
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 most essential needs of
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 and finding a place to live is a serious issue for many
people
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. It is said that buying a
house
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 is better than renting
one
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. In
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 situation.
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 the
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 hand, leasing a
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 has some benefits
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 as
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 to switch and suitable for most
people
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, You can switch places whenever you want.
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, if you do not really enjoy the current
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 and want a better
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, you will just need to pack your belongings and move to
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 place. You are not attached to the
house
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 because you are not the owner and don't have to worry about it anymore.
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, most
people
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 do not have a lot of money to buy an accommodation.
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, students and poor
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 can not afford an apartment, so renting is a suitable and reasonable choice. Leasing is much cheaper than buying, so
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 is a perfect solution for
people
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 who do not have financial
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 the other hand, being a
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 owner brings some advantages
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 as safety and financial security.
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, you always have a home to live
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 you have no income or money.
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 the pandemic, there are many
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 who lost their jobs and they are pushed
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 a very bad situation because they do not make money to pay the rent. But if you have a
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, you will still have a place to live and maintain your life.
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, the
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 is a real estate asset.
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, you can sell a
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 a better price than the time you bought it.
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a valuable asset that you can own for a long time and don't have to worry about its value because most real estate assets always increase their price in the future. In conclusion, owning or leasing a
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 is still a big problem for many
people
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 and
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 problem still depends on
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 situation. Personally, I think buying a
house
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 is much better because its benefits outweigh the
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ones
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • homeownership
  • equity
  • financial security
  • status symbol
  • investment
  • real estate
  • property value appreciation
  • asset
  • community
  • belonging
  • renovation
  • customization
  • socio-political aspects
  • stability
  • permanence
  • rental uncertainties
  • life satisfaction
  • control over living conditions
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