You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: -explain why you want to leave your current job -describe what kind of job you are looking for -ask for some help or advice

#job #friend #-explain #-describe #-ask #help #advice

Dear Harvey, I hope you and your family all are well. I am writing to you about seeking suggestions regarding finding a new job related to my studies.

Firstly

, as you know now I am working in "The Gopal Sweets "which is situated in Chandigarh. Here I am working as a waiter. Now, I made a decision that

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

give my resignation letter in the next week

due to

the long commute and low pay scale.

Moreover

, I would like to find out a job related to my academics because I have done three years of professional courses in cooking Western cuisine.

Along with

that, finding a well-renowned restaurant which meets my expectations.

Finally

basically

Add a comma

,basically

show examples

you hailed from Chandigarh. You have more information about where I have to apply for a new job and

also

guide me suitable area so I would take a room on rent as per my budget. Thank you in advance for the great suggestions. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, John

Submitted by parvinderp93 on Mon May 08 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

170 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

4.5
band
Write a letter to your neighbour about the damage that occurred to your car while he was parking his car in the lane outside your home. In the letter, you should: describe the damage say how you feel about this problem suggest to him what actions he should take.
I hope you are doing well, I am writing a letter pertaining to one problem which I came across hence I feel that I must tell you as a good neighbourhood.
5
band
Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend less than 40 minutes on this task and write at least 250 words
Some individuals are of the opinion that the best way to connect various cultures is through music. I firmly support the given statement and in this essay, I am going to elaborate more on the reasons supporting this idea.
6.5
band
Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.
Parents throughout the world place spend time reading with their offspring to prepare them for school where their literacy skills are further developed; however, recent research suggests that focusing on reading at an early age can be detrimental, and participating in fun activities would be far more beneficial. I am a strong advocate of this approach, and the benefits of it will be covered in this essay.
5
band
Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
It has become debatable whether the rate of illegal activities could be minimized by putting criminals in jail for the long term or if there are other methods which are more effective. This essay intends to analyse the validity of both perceptions before forming my opinion.
6
band
Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some will agree with the point that luck plays a vital role to achieve endeavours. Simultaneously, some will deny this and will stick to talent and hard work are the key to achieving success. My opinion is both luck and hard work is important in fulfilling any task.

You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: -explain why you want to leave your current job -describe what kind of job you are looking for -ask for some help or advice

Write a letter to your neighbour about the damage that occurred to your car while he was parking his car in the lane outside your home. In the letter, you should: describe the damage say how you feel about this problem suggest to him what actions he should take.

Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?