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The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2000

The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2000
#show #household #expenditures #japan #malaysia #year
The given tables represent
sales
 of
fairtrade-labelled
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 products
such
 as bananas and coffee
seperately
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separately
 among five different European
countries
 in 1999 and 2004.
Overall
, coffee
sales
 had increased for all
countries
compare
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 to
babanas
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bananas
balance
sales
, which
was
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slightly decreased for Belgium and Sweeden, between 1999 and 2004. The UK had become the most important customer among other cities with 20
millions
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million
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of
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euros
expenditure
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in expenditure
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 in 2004.
This
 trend
followed
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was followed
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 by Switzerland which was the leading supplier in 1999, but in 2004 their
sales
about
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were about
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 6
millions
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million
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of
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euros
.
On the other hand
, Sweden had remained
its
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in its
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 position in 2004,
who
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which
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 was the least significant
saler
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sales
 of coffee. For bananas, the UK and Switzerland
again
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are again
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 remarkable suppliers with 47 and 5.5
millions
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million
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of
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euros
, respectively.
In contrast
,
sales
 of bananas in Belgium and Sweeden decreased
under
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by
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 1.1
millions
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million
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of
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euros
. These
countries
were contribute
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contributed
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 less than other European
countries
 for both products each
years
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year
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, countries, millions, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household expenditures
  • proportion
  • cultural differences
  • economic differences
  • living standards
  • real estate market
  • public transportation
  • private transportation
  • infrastructure
  • government healthcare policies
  • quality of life
  • holistic view
  • inflation
  • economic growth
  • societal norms
  • globalization
  • communication expenses
  • education expenses
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