The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2000
The given tables represent
sales
of Use synonyms
fairtrade-labelled
products Correct your spelling
fair trade-labelled
such
as bananas and coffee Linking Words
seperately
among five different European Correct your spelling
separately
countries
in 1999 and 2004.
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Overall
, coffee Linking Words
sales
had increased for all Use synonyms
countries
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compare
to Wrong verb form
compared
babanas
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bananas
balance
sales
, which Use synonyms
was
slightly decreased for Belgium and Sweeden, between 1999 and 2004.
The UK had become the most important customer among other cities with 20 Unnecessary verb
apply
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millions
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million
of
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apply
euros
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expenditure
in 2004. Change preposition
in expenditure
This
trend Linking Words
followed
by Switzerland which was the leading supplier in 1999, but in 2004 their Add a missing verb
was followed
sales
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about
6 Add a missing verb
were about
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millions
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million
of
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apply
euros
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Sweden had remained Linking Words
its
position in 2004, Change preposition
in its
who
was the least significant Correct pronoun usage
which
saler
of coffee.
For bananas, the UK and Switzerland Correct your spelling
sales
again
remarkable suppliers with 47 and 5.5 Add a missing verb
are again
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millions
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million
of
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apply
euros
, respectively. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
sales
of bananas in Belgium and Sweeden decreased Use synonyms
under
1.1 Change preposition
by
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millions
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million
of
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apply
euros
. These Use synonyms
countries
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were contribute
less than other European Change the verb form
contributed
countries
for both products each Use synonyms
years
.Change to a singular noun
year
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