Some scientist think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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of communication with aliens is thought to be a positive thing by many people and experts.

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, opponents of that believe it can be harmful

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our world and human being. As far as I am concerned, being in contact with

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another life form

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from exoplanets would be beneficial for the

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.

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communication is taken place with

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an alien

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civilization, it would bring us many benefits. First of all, it is believed that clever aliens have

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advanced technology so we can learn technological innovation, bringing those devices to our

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to use. In terms of health problems, cutting-edge medical equipment might reduce the risk of operation or duration of surgery or

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the disease fast. Another advantage is, we can improve a wealth of knowledge about

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because of those life forms.

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possible with

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training, which is provided by themselves, about their research findings related to other planets and life forms,

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problem they face in their own place.

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, if they have similar problems

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us

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change, their way of tackling the problem can be helpful for us.

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, it seems to take a step to send a message to aliens is redundant and includes some negative results. There is no information about their way of thinking, behaviours and characterisations. Not only they can be hostile but

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, they can be destructive to us. Meaning that, they can see us as a potential threat and

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inviting attack can happen to us.

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, meeting with them might cause unknown problems. To illustrate that, their civilization possibly has got a contagious disease that people can suffer from that. In conclusion, in my

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supporting space science and scientist may make our world more different and liveable.

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all possible negative results, we should be brave enough to find the answer for our world.