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Many people think that fast food companies should not be allowed to advertise while others believe that all companies should have the right to advertise. What is your opinion?

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Nowadays, a certain segment of individuals thinks fast
food
 companies should not
allowed
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be allowed
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 to advertise,
while
 others believe that all companies should have the
right
 to advertise. In my ,opinion every have the
right
 to advertise.
This
 essay will discuss both sides. Marketing and advertising are the main keys to success in business. Different societies think that fast
food
 companies are not allowed to have
this
right
.
First,
fast
food
 disadvantages
has
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 been all over the news and internet. Several diseases have been reported from fast foods.
Therefore
 it is not ethical to advertise something
that is
 bad for the
overall
 health.
Second,
junk
food
 causes obesity. A recent study showed that the average obesity disorder had increased
due to
 the consumption of junk
food
.
Third,
children may get attracted to the fast
food
 billboards which leads them to buy and consume more.
On the other hand
, other people believe that every
company
 has the
right
 to advertise. Without marketing the
company
 can not reach out to the customers, not only that but it will slow and eliminate the growth process and profit margin of the
company
. In conclusion, some people are against the fast
food
right
 to advertise
due to
 several reasons.
While
 others believe that each
company
 have the full to exercise advertising power. In my
opinionl
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opinion
, each
company
 has the
right
 to advertise and promote its products.
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