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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child to having a large number of toys?

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Toys are an integral part of any individual
while
 growing up. There are different types of toys available in the market to which a majority of children are attracted. There are
parents
 who buy wide range of these items to their kids, but few of them do not buy them. There are few benefits and drawbacks to the same. The major reason why
parents
 prefer to buy playthings for children would be to avoid or distract them to use mobile phones.
Due to
 the rapid evolution of technology, children these days do not want to play the good old board
games
, jig-saw puzzles.
For instance
 : I have a four year old cousin who spends more time on a mobile or a tablet rather than the playthings. So his
parents
, have bought him the most expensive yet interesting
games
 for him to enjoy which simultaneously helps with the memory. The introduction of these helped him in many ways and started to explore the other different kinds of physical
games
 available. Clay
games
 are expensive but is a fun way to learn art.
However
, there are a few
parents
 who oppose the idea of buying expensive toys to their kids.
According to
 the Times report in 2020, there is a 32% population who do not prefer to buy expensive things for their kids the reasons ranging from not economical, breaking new items in the initial few days of buying them and the important one being interference with their studies .
For example
 : My friend's son has got a new video game set which was quite costly and he has broken it in two days. So the elders would not like to buy the same again. Another friend of mine has never given her child a toy to play saying it would damage his ability to concentrate on studies. Considering all the scenarios above, I feel that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages and if any child is concentrating more on playtime,
then
 it would be responsibility of the parent to make the child understand that.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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