The Pie chart below gives information on the highest level education of women in someland 1945 and 1995
The two pie charts provided information about how different the highest
level
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education
of women in Someland Use synonyms
percentagewise
between 1945 and 1995.
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percentage-wise
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, at the beginning of the Linking Words
period
post graduate contributed the least to the Use synonyms
level
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education
of women in Someland, and no schooling and third grade Change preposition
of education
the
most significant of Add a missing verb
were the
level
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education
. In comparison, Use synonyms
at the end
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period
, no schooling, third grade and Use synonyms
year
6 became the lowest Use synonyms
of
women’s Change preposition
apply
level
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education
, and Use synonyms
bachelor’s
degree was the largest of Correct article usage
a bachelor’s
level
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education
.
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degree
accounted for 0% in 1945, which increase twentyfold to one-fifth in 1995, and bachelor’s Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
degree
was 1% in 1945Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
,
and experienced a significant rose to 50% in 1995. At the beginning, Remove the comma
apply
year
12 was 15% and, that experienced a slight growth of 5% in 1995. Use synonyms
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year
9 in 1945 remained constant Use synonyms
10
% Change preposition
at 10
both
years.
No school and third grade, which comprised exactly three quarters in 1945, fell dramatically to 0%, respectively, after a 50-Change preposition
in both
year
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period
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6 Use synonyms
was
made up 15% in 1945, Unnecessary verb
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that
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which
significant
to 0% Change the word
significantly
at the end
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period
.Add an article
the period
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words level, education, period, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
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