Some people believe that online study is more effective that on campus while others disagree. Discuss both the disadvantages and advantages of online study.

One of the social concerns today relates to studying
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in which online
study
is more beneficial than at
school
.
This
essay will discuss the pros and cons of
this
trend. On the one hand, there are several reasons why studying online is beneficial. A common reason is that
students
could save
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time by not going to
school
and preparing carefully every single day.
For instance
, In 2020 some
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that
students
studying online have more time to sleep and enjoy breakfast than
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others.
Thus
, they obtain more energy and
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excitement
for classes.
Moreover
, they might feel comfortable at home and it’s
also
easier for them to get
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stuffs
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kinds of stuff
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such
as books, pens, and a dictionary… so they can
study
effectively and conveniently. In some recent studies by Harvard, studying
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somewhere familiar could improve
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learning quality and long-term memory.
On the other hand
, there are a number of disadvantages of online
study
that people should take into consideration. One obvious drawback is that teachers and parents hard to control their children
while
having class at home, they do not actually know what the
students
do behind the screen. It’s
propably
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probably
a latent danger. So on, because at home there is no rule or any regulation, those
students
learn passively and dependently. There was a “Tezla” survey in 2000, which informed more than 66% of online
students
do
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(surfing the internet, messaging, playing video games..)
while
they having classes. Another negative effect no less important is the interaction between teachers and
students
is worse than it does at
school
. They could not connect face to face, eyes to eyes, and it
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harder for them to raise a question immediately. That interaction may be disturbed by
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internet problems and cause a lot of annoyance. In conclusion,
online
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study
could bring about certain benefits, but its negative consequences should not be overlooked. My view is that going to
school
directly can result in more benefits than disadvantages.
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