the graph below shows how elderly people in united states spent their free time between 1980 and 2010

the graph below shows how elderly people in united states spent their free time between 1980 and 2010
The graph gives illustrates the trend which elderly Americans in four categories ( reading, thinking,theatre ,watching
tv
and surfing the
internet
) in their free time during 3 decades (1980 to 2010).
Overall
, thinking, reading,watching
tv
and surfing the
internet
were
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uptrend after 30 years (from the 1980s to 2010s).
Although
, there was a fall in the amount of choosing Theatre of people in the US at the same time. With regards to graphs, reading , watching
TV
and surfing the
internet
which fluctuates in trending . It can be seen that reading slightly increased reaching around 15% in the 2000s . After the 2000s , there was a dramatic rise in reading and reaching the top at 40% in the 2010s. From the 1980s to the 2000s , the number of watching
tv
gradually go up by 10% (from 60% to 70%).
Then
it drops slowly in the next ten years reaching over 60%.Surfing the
internet
fluctuate from the 1980s to the 2000s , it increase slightly by 10% in the first decade
then
it rapidly declined to reach the bottom at 20% in the 2000s after that it grew quickly and reached 60% in the 2010s. In the period the 1980s to 1990s, there go down strongly reaching 30% in the 1990s
then
it gradually go up to nearly 45% 20 years later.There was a dramatic rocket of hiking . it increased 4 times between the 1980s and 2000s
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tv, internet with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "go up" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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