The United Nations recently celebrated its 70th anniversary. What benefits has it brought during this time? Do you think the UN will last another 70 years?

UN,

this

giant international organization has been established since the end of the second

world

war and in recent years it has become a mature 70-year-old elderly creature.

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more than half of the century,

this

global association has been trying to resolve national conflicts peacefully and expand welfare, health and

tranquility

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all around the

world

. In

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essay,

firstly

the advantages of UN existence will be counted and

then

we will shed light on remaining of

this

organization in the future of

current

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modern

world

. When it comes to the achievements of the United Nations, it is difficult to imagine a

world

without the United Nations because it plays a leading role in everything from conflict resolution to supplying food, hygiene water and health services for the deprived areas of the

world

.

For instance

, in the first days of 2022,

Russian

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army started a bloody and cruel war against Ukraine’s nation. If the UN did not intervene to avert a Russian attack on the nuclear power plant of Ukraine, eastern countries of Europe might confront a major nuclear catastrophe, and it would be a real tragedy for

the

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human beings.

As well as

that,

this

foundation is highly active in providing humanitarian

aids

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.

For example

, some institutions

such

as UNICEF or WHO and so on, which are sisters of the UN have different attempts to send healthy food supplies to some poor African

country

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countries

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for

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surviving innocent children from hunger, starvation and inevitable death. For the future of united nations, the way I see it, in

this

dog-eat-dog

world

where humanity and sympathy for others and love

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been disappearing gradually among

this

globe’s inhabitants, the presence of

this

neutral system and other humanitarian foundations relating to the UN will be crucially workable and effective for stopping the politicians to explode

this

planet with their cupidity and greed. I think in the future, despite the fact that politicians and powerful countries will try hard and do their best to end the work of

this

institution, the pressure of public opinion will not allow them to be successful in achieving their ominous goals.

To sum up

, the UN appeared after the violent and bloody second

world

war to help innocent humans for having calm and high-quality lives and it has to support and put its attempts into

practicing

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this

plan forever as long as humans are living in

this

world

.