The chart below shows the result of survey of patient who stayed in three different wards of a hospitals. It shows what percentage of the patients replied "very good" aout various aspects of their hospital ecperience.
The bar graph gives information on the patient’s reviews of three different hospitals’
wards
.Overall
, It is noticeable that Holly Wood had the best reviews in all four
categories (Hospital staff, Waiting time
, Quality
of treatment, and Quality
of aftercare) . Additionally
, there is a gap between Holly and the other wards
: Maple Ward
, and Oak Ward
.
In terms of three wards
, Holly Ward
gets from 75 to 90 “very good” responses in four
sections, which is the best review compared to the other two wards
in all four
sections. Following Holly Ward
, Oak Ward
comes in second for good reviews except for Waiting Time
. Although
there is a reverse in Waiting time
, Maple Ward
was considered the most unsatisfied ward
from their patient’ experience.
From the view of the four
categories, Quality
of treatment is rated good for all Correct article usage
the Quality
wards
. Hospital staff and Quality
of aftercare have a similar tendency between the three wards
; Holly Ward
gets the highest review, Oak Ward
follows, and Maple Ward
has the lowest evaluation.Interestingly, Waiting time
seems to be the most challenging category for Wards
to get good feedback from their patients.
To sum up
, depending on their patients, Holly Ward
gives the most satisfied services based on four
categories.Submitted by ka.ki.ku.ke.kohei0827 on
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