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people say that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see artwork and historical objects by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is a controversy about the need for public
museums
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 and
art
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galleries
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 since the invention of computers and virtual tours for seeing artworks and historical
objects
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. I disagree with the idea that computers will substitute the roles of
museums
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 and
art
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galleries
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. In my opinion, even though the development of the Internet and related technologies, it is not possible for virtual tours to replace a lot of expressions of seeing artworks and
objects
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 in person. First of all, it would be quite different for audiences or visitors to see the arts with their eyes directly compared to the view from appreciating the
objects
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 through the monitors. They can not feel the exact textures, colours, and smells through the computers. They will only be able to get detailed information about the
objects
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 and artists but not the expressions and feelings from the artist's brushes. The only way to appreciate the beauty of
art
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 is to see it through your eyes, touch, and heart.
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, people will not only the exhibition itself but the atmosphere and noises of the
galleries
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 and
museums
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.
While
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 appreciating historical
objects
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 and pictures, we
also
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 absorb the mood and the music of our circumstances.
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 is why sound and sights would be one of the most crucial elements of
art
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 like movies and orchestras. We can feel those things in different ways through our life, ages, and the very emotion and mood in the moments.
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,
galleries
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 provide us with the space for discussion and sharing of information and emotions. There are various methods for people to appreciate artistic and historical things but a majority of people want to have conversations about the exhibition and share their feelings. For these reasons, I think there are a lot of important roles in
art
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galleries
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 and public
museums
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 which can not be replaced by the Internet and the state of
art
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 digital technologies and those places will be necessary in the future for our descendants too.
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