The diagram below shows the number of shoppers who visited a new shopping complex in its first year of operation and the estimated number of shoppers over the same period. Below the diagram, there are two charts, which show the sales at the centre in the first and last quarter of the year.
The first given line chart and bar chart illustrates how many customers visited a new mall in the initial year of operation and the predicted buyers over the same given period.
While
the other diagrams, which are the two remaining diagrams display the sales at the centre in the first and last
quarter of the year.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that almost the real number of mall visitors was higher than the
expected one over the given period except in three months. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, in the initial four months, people
tend to purchase clothes and food, whereas
, in the final quarter, toys were the highest number of products which were bought by the visitors.
In terms of the real total of purchasers, it rose significantly from January to May, then
it fluctuated from June to October before experiencing a dramatic jump until the end of the given period. Additionally
, for the year, the grand total of buyers was higher than the expected one except between August and October stood at 50.000, 52.000, and 40.000 respectively. Besides
, in October, the figure for shoppers experienced the lowest which stood at about 40.000. However
, in December was the highest at approximately 160.000.
Regarding the wares sold in per cent between January to April, clothes, foods, and others were the highest items which were purchased by visitors, at 25%, 25% and about 24% respectively. Meanwhile, people
tended not to buy toys, computers and electrical, at around 5%, 10% and 15%. Then
, toys, foods, and others were the most products which were bought by people
, from September to December comprising 30%, 20%, and 25% correspondingly. In contrast
, electrical, computers and clothes were less common for people
to purchase at the end
of quarter
, accounting for 5%, 10% and 10% respectively.Add an article
the quarter
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