The charts show fresh fruit exports in 2010.

The charts show fresh fruit exports in 2010.
The given bar charts illustrate the amount of 4 types of exported fresh fruits in some countries in the year 2010. In general, orange was shipped most
while
other types of citrus fruits were exported mainly
in
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Mexico. Looking at the first chart for more detail, the United States exported about 700,000 metric
tons
of orange. These figures for Egypt and South Africa were significantly higher which reached 900 and 1000 thousand metric
tons
of
this
type of fruit, respectively. In terms of lemon which ranked as the second most popular fruit, people in Argentina shipped more than 250,000 metric
tons
and
this
figure doubled in Turkey.
In addition
, there were around 450 thousand metric
tons
exported in Mexico, which was slightly lower than those in Turkey. Meanwhile, Turkey exported about 175,000 metric
tons
of grapefruit, which
while
these statistics for South Africa and the U.S. were at the same amount ( around 225,000 metric
tons
), and became the third most well-known fruit. More than 400 thousand metric
tons
of other citrus fruits were exported by Mexicans, and these figures for the United States and Isreal were minimal to the
overall
amount.
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