The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone call in the uk, divided into three categories.from 1995-2002

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone call in the uk, divided into three categories.from 1995-2002
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The chart shows us the total number of
minutes
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of call in the UK and we can understand how many telephones
is
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are
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important these days.
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survey occurred during the seven years from 1995-2002.
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diagram is divided into three call types. The first section is a local-fixed
line
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, the second part is a national and international-fixed
line
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. The
last
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bar chart is mobiles. We can see one of the three types of calls is a local-fixed
line
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and it is the most used. In comparison,
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chart illustrates in 1995 mobiles were very little applied about 5
minutes
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. Because cell phones were newly manufactured and some people used them but the number of calls by mobile increased each year eventually the number of
minutes
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of mobile calls was about 45
minutes
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in2002.
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, the most
of
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apply
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local-fixed
line
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call was in 1999
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this
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type of call was reduced and national and international-fixed
line
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was increasing each year from 1995-2002.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes, line with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number
  • minutes
  • telephone calls
  • UK
  • divided into
  • categories
  • from
  • to
  • overall
  • increased significantly
  • local fixed-line calls
  • accounted for
  • largest proportion
  • throughout
  • period
  • international calls
  • highest rate of growth
  • experiencing
  • sharp increase
  • national long-distance calls
  • remained relatively stable
  • slight decline
  • towards
  • end
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