The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone call in the uk, divided into three categories.from 1995-2002

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone call in the uk, divided into three categories.from 1995-2002
The chart shows us the total number of
minutes
of call in the UK and we can understand how many telephones
is
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are
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important these days.
This
survey occurred during the seven years from 1995-2002.
This
diagram is divided into three call types. The first section is a local-fixed
line
, the second part is a national and international-fixed
line
. The
last
bar chart is mobiles. We can see one of the three types of calls is a local-fixed
line
and it is the most used. In comparison,
this
chart illustrates in 1995 mobiles were very little applied about 5
minutes
. Because cell phones were newly manufactured and some people used them but the number of calls by mobile increased each year eventually the number of
minutes
of mobile calls was about 45
minutes
in2002.
Moreover
, the most
of
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local-fixed
line
call was in 1999
then
this
type of call was reduced and national and international-fixed
line
was increasing each year from 1995-2002.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes, line with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number
  • minutes
  • telephone calls
  • UK
  • divided into
  • categories
  • from
  • to
  • overall
  • increased significantly
  • local fixed-line calls
  • accounted for
  • largest proportion
  • throughout
  • period
  • international calls
  • highest rate of growth
  • experiencing
  • sharp increase
  • national long-distance calls
  • remained relatively stable
  • slight decline
  • towards
  • end
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