The chart below gives data about the popularity (proportion of people doing regularly)of various sports in different countries.The graph shows the amount of time that people in those countries spend reading books,newspapers or internet articles per day.There is also a table showing the average price of books.
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The chart illustrates information about the famous engagement of
people
in Tennis,Swimming,Running and Gym,while
the bar chart describes the time spent by people
in the given country for
other activities like reading academic Change preposition
on
literatures
, Change the wording
literature
kinds of literature
pieces of literature
works of literature
magazine
or getting information from the Fix the agreement mistake
magazines
internet
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Internet
everyday
.Replace the word
every day
Also
,the table given gives report
on the average price of books read in the four different countries(Add an article
a report
Nation
A,Fix the agreement mistake
Nations
B
,C and D).The units of measurement are Percentage
,Minutes and Money.
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Percentages
Overall
,we can see that most people
visit gyms in Nation
D, followed by Running in Nation
B
while
all other regions thread a similar pattern. However
,people
in Country
A,C and D spent almost the same time reading books and retrieving information from other sources. Next,the table shows that all Fix the agreement mistake
Countries
nation
have Fix the agreement mistake
nations
range
value of prices.
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a range
To begin
with, Region D has approximately 25% of people
who use the gym,it ranked the highest position,followed by Racing which took second place about 23% in Nation
B
.The remaining countries follow the same pattern which accounts for approximately 10%.
Regarding the time spent reading,the four countries exhausted about 50 minutes on
studying on a daily basis, except for Change preposition
of
Nation
B
civilians who spent 20minutes
. Correct your spelling
20 minutes
Furthermore
, all given region
explored Fix the agreement mistake
regions
same
amount of funds Change the article
the same
purchasing
academic materials which ranged between 6.9 Euros to 7.1 EurosChange preposition
for purchasing
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