The chart below gives data about the popularity (proportion of people doing regularly)of various sports in different countries.The graph shows the amount of time that people in those countries spend reading books,newspapers or internet articles per day.There is also a table showing the average price of books.
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The chart illustrates information about the famous engagement of
people
in Tennis,Swimming,Running and Gym,Use synonyms
while
the bar chart describes the time spent by Linking Words
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for
other activities like reading academic Change preposition
on
literatures
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literature
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magazine
or getting information from the Fix the agreement mistake
magazines
internet
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Internet
everyday
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every day
Also
,the table given gives Linking Words
report
on the average price of books read in the four different countries(Add an article
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,C and D).The units of measurement are Use synonyms
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,Minutes and Money.
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Overall
,we can see that most Linking Words
people
visit gyms in Use synonyms
Nation
D, followed by Running in Use synonyms
Nation
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B
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while
all other regions thread a similar pattern. Linking Words
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A,C and D spent almost the same time reading books and retrieving information from other sources. Next,the table shows that all Fix the agreement mistake
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nations
range
value of prices.
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To begin
with, Region D has approximately 25% of Linking Words
people
who use the gym,it ranked the highest position,followed by Racing which took second place about 23% in Use synonyms
Nation
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B
.The remaining countries follow the same pattern which accounts for approximately 10%.
Regarding the time spent reading,the four countries exhausted about 50 minutes Use synonyms
on
studying on a daily basis, except for Change preposition
of
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B
civilians who spent Use synonyms
20minutes
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20 minutes
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, all given Linking Words
region
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regions
same
amount of funds Change the article
the same
purchasing
academic materials which ranged between 6.9 Euros to 7.1 EurosChange preposition
for purchasing
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