You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: •Introduce yourself and your family. •Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find . •Give your preference for the location of the accommodation.

DEAR SIR/MADAM, I am writing a letter in regard to that I need accommodation in Manchester, United Kingdom.
Firstly
, my name is Muhammad Rizwan Shaukat and I will be moving to Manchester with my wife , one son and a daughter. They are 11 years old and 7 years old respectively. Recently, I got a job in Manchester and need to relocate.
Secondly
, I need a house with three rooms
along with
one living room, kitchen and a bathroom. One room is needed for me and my wife
while
the other two rooms are for my children. We
also
need a garage where we can park our car as we need a car to travel.
Thirdly
, the location I prefer is, it should be near to my job and
also
near the centre so that we can buy groceries and other items easily.
Moreover
, it should be near the school as my children go there school comfortably. At
last
, I would be grateful to you if you find me an accommodation before the end of the month. Yours faithfully, Rizwan.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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