People who cause their own illnesses through unhealthy lifestyles and poor diets should have to pay more for health care. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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diseases nowadays

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from unhealthy

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sport which

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to spending a lot of money

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management and improving healthcare. As far as I'm concerned I agree that

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is spreading all over the world and care

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to be taken to minimize it.

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lot of useful and easier methods to practice different kinds of sports to improve our health system

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we can see gems these days almost everywhere for that purpose or different parks to have a walk and

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fresh air , unfortunately countless of people doing that and the largest proportion not even think in their bodies and how to improve it. Another important aspect is

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of

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that we deliver to our body plays a significant role in improving our health-life style ,

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fruits and vegetables are both rich in vitamins and minerals , meat

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a great amount of iron ,

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and milk

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a beneficial bacteria (probiotics) that have an important effect in our gastrointestinal tract protection, unlike so eating harmful staff or junk

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will do the opposite impact to our bodies, taking soft drinks rich in sugar or drinking alcohol will damage our kidneys, having snacks and chips which both contain a

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calories with no benefit seen from eating them , all those

unbeneficail

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unbeneficial

food

will lead to different diseases

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specially

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in our gastrointestinal area and

this

will make us spend a big amount of money for

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and treatments. In

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someone can preserve their

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body environment and

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good looking by

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a reasonable

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exercise

and eating a healthy amount of

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