Technology is becoming progressively universal. in the fullness of time classrooms teachers will be substituted for technology.Do you agree or disagree.

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Automation is gradually taking over the structure of the world. With time, robots will replace teaching in schools. In my opinion, I agree

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will increase the quality of education and reduce illiteracy

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. The advent of technology has brought about many changes ranging from health care, businesses, industries, etc. Inculcating

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into our educational system will standardize studying improving the student's ability to understand what is being taught.

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, being able to explain things is hard for some teachers making learning difficult

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their students but if robotics are used to convey

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information, they have the ability to do so accurately, since they are made for

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purposes.

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, when learning is computerized, studying will be readily available for all irrespective of where the individual is and the time frame for those that had

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, people are more educated now

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up online courses are graduates without abandoning their careers or jobs. Moreso,

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generation find it difficult to venture into teaching jobs as they think is less promise and they are moved

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can be a solution to

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problem. Which will increase the number of tutors. In conclusion,

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computerization is globally taking

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, inculcating it into our school system, will raise our standard of education and

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make it reachable to everyone

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the globe.

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