Technology is becoming progressively universal. in the fullness of time classrooms teachers will be substituted for technology.Do you agree or disagree.

Automation is gradually taking over the structure of the world. With time, robots will replace teaching in schools. In my opinion, I agree
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innovation as
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will increase the quality of education and reduce illiteracy
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. The advent of technology has brought about many changes ranging from health care, businesses, industries, etc. Inculcating
this
into our educational system will standardize studying improving the student's ability to understand what is being taught.
For instance
, being able to explain things is hard for some teachers making learning difficult
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their students but if robotics are used to convey
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information, they have the ability to do so accurately, since they are made for
such
purposes.
Furthermore
, when learning is computerized, studying will be readily available for all irrespective of where the individual is and the time frame for those that had
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busy
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.
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, people are more educated now
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to past centuries, many
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up online courses are graduates without abandoning their careers or jobs. Moreso,
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generation find it difficult to venture into teaching jobs as they think is less promise and they are moved
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fame, which has
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impact
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career
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. Bringing technology into
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can be a solution to
this
problem. Which will increase the number of tutors. In conclusion,
while
computerization is globally taking
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leads
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in
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of human
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, inculcating it into our school system, will raise our standard of education and
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make it reachable to everyone
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the globe.
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