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Parents should take courses in parenting in order to improve the lives of their children. To what extent do you agree?

#parents #courses #lives #children
In the current time,
although
 some people believe that
parents
 have to
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 themself by
studing
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studying
spacific
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specific
 courses related to raising their
children
, others believe
that is
 not
nesserly
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lesser
 because it is inborn
skills
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. In my opinion, taking training to improve their parenting
skills
 will give the
children
 better lives.
First,
children
 grow up safely in educated families because they
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 to expand their knowledge.
In other words
, when caretakers attend to programs for developing their
skills
 to deal with their
children
 ,that would improve the mental health
for
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 their
youngster
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youngsters
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 because the
parents
 will understand their needs and build
trust
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 relationships. A prime example is
that
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Swedan
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Sweden
, which has been ranked as
a
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 best place to
rais
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raise
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children
 because parenting educational courses are essential in the country.
As a result
, not only the
physically
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 care is important, but
also
mentail
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mental
 care is vital and
this
need
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 a wide range
og
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of
 knowledge.
Second,
sharping
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children
's
skills
 start
from
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at
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 their home when the
parents
focuse
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focus
focuses
focused
 more
about
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on
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 the
children
's
strengthes
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strengths
 and build them up.
This
 means that if
parents
focuse
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focus
focuses
 more on their
children
's
personality
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personalities
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, that would help the
children
 to develop their
skills
 and have a
signaficant
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significant
 future.
For example
, the recent research
has
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done by MIT University
that
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include one thousand families, and the research
focuse
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focus
focuses
focused
 on their
children
 which has revealed that the majority of the
younster
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youngster
youngsters
are
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awareness
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about
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their
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strength
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 point in their personality and they have a
spacific
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specific
 goal related to
thier
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their
 top
skills
.
Thus
, what can be said is that a vivid future for
children
 depends on their
parents
 because they play a
signaficant
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significant
 role to direct the
children
. In conclusion,
after
this
 essay has manifested the points mentioned above, it can be reiterated that parenting program has beneficial impacts on the whole family.
Moreover
, I am convinced that remarkable offspring
is
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come from wise
parents
.
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