Parents should take courses in parenting in order to improve the lives of their children. To what extent do you agree?

In the current time,

although

some people believe that

parents

have to

educating

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themself by

studing

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studying

spacific

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specific

courses related to raising their

children

, others believe

that is

not

nesserly

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lesser

because it is inborn

skills

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. In my opinion, taking training to improve their parenting

skills

will give the

children

better lives.

First,

children

grow up safely in educated families because they

concern

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to expand their knowledge.

In other words

, when caretakers attend to programs for developing their

skills

to deal with their

children

,that would improve the mental health

for

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their

youngster

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because the

parents

will understand their needs and build

trust

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relationships. A prime example is

that

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Swedan

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Sweden

, which has been ranked as

a

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best place to

rais

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raise

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children

because parenting educational courses are essential in the country.

As a result

, not only the

physically

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care is important, but

also

mentail

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mental

care is vital and

this

need

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a wide range

og

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of

knowledge.

Second,

sharping

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children

's

skills

start

from

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their home when the

parents

focuse

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focus

focuses

focused

more

about

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on

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the

children

's

strengthes

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strengths

and build them up.

This

means that if

parents

focuse

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focus

focuses

more on their

children

's

personality

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, that would help the

children

to develop their

skills

and have a

signaficant

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significant

future.

For example

, the recent research

has

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done by MIT University

that

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include one thousand families, and the research

focuse

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focus

focuses

focused

on their

children

which has revealed that the majority of the

younster

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youngsters

are

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awareness

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about

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their

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the

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strength

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point in their personality and they have a

spacific

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specific

goal related to

thier

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their

top

skills

.

Thus

, what can be said is that a vivid future for

children

depends on their

parents

because they play a

signaficant

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significant

role to direct the

children

. In conclusion,

after

this

essay has manifested the points mentioned above, it can be reiterated that parenting program has beneficial impacts on the whole family.

Moreover

, I am convinced that remarkable offspring

is

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come from wise

parents

.