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The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the United States by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the United States by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The next two tables illustrate the number of foreign students in Canada and the USA, which
divided
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 by country of origin. All information
include
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 years of study and
perfomance
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performance
, 2002 and 2003 respectively. To summarize facts, In Canada, there
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 only positive changes
throught
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through
 mentioned period. The total number
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increased
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percentage
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, from 59.870 per year to 70.004 .
However
, In America, there were negative and positive options, from -9% to +7 %, and
overall
 only +2%, from 581.600 - 592.230. First of all, the biggest number in
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China
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 column, there was
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a
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half of
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the 2002'
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2002'
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2002's
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 numbers of people
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 to it, 35% of new
India
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 individuals and
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 small minority from America.
Secondly
, in the United States, there was a little decrease in India, 9 percentage at all.
On the other hand
, Chinese and Canadians had a significant grow about 6 -7%.
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