The best way to reduce crime among youngsters is to teach parents good parenting skills. Do you agree or disagree.

In
this
contemporary world, good parenting has become really a necessity to guide
youngsters
in the right direction. The
crime
rate has been rising among
younger
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generation rapidly, and as a solution,
parents
must be taught parenting
skills
to prevent it. As far as I am concerned, I agree that
parents
should be taught psychological
skills
such
as understanding
youngsters
and how to engage them
to
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extra-curricular
activities
so that they can guide their children to avoid
crime related
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activities
.
To begin
with, Fathers and mothers must be taught to understand the psychology of their
boy
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boys
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or girl. There should be regular sessions with psychologists who will teach them
teenagers
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thinking
process
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processes
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.
For example
,
according to
a study by Oxford University,
Youngsters
whose
parents
understands
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them well and talk to them regularly are less likely to commit
crime
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a crime
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.
To sum up
, based on the facts, It is really essential to learn parenting
skills
.
On the other hand
,
Parents
should be taught how to engage their
youngsters
in extra-curricular
activities
. These
activities
can engage them in other
activities
as a result
they won't be engaged in
crime
-related
activities
.
For Instance
, regularly participating in sports is definitely a good thing as they won't have time to commit sins.
To conclude
, I am of the view that providing
parents
with the right guidance to understand younger
generations
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mind and engaging
to
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them to
adiitional
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additional
curricular
activities
is a great way to reduce
crime
among them. It is recommended that
parents
should have some understanding of parenting
skills
.
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